I rarely publish people's in-depth reactions to my development notes cos I take script confidentiality very seriously. However, since Bang2writer Dom Carver's already published his reaction on his blog, I figured I HAD to share it too, LOL:
"The sixty pages were done, but I knew something wasn't sitting right, couldn't put my finger on it, so I sent it out to the lovely Bang2write.....she gave it to me straight like she always does...ooh, err!
'Get rid of the police,' she said. I stared blankly at her...or I would have done if she hadn't have said that in an email. So I stared blankly at the email instead. Get rid of the police? What, all of them? Yep, all of them, not just in this episode but in all the others too. Holy crap! Bangers (as I never call her) is most often than not spot on with her judgement and I trust her above all others. But get rid of the police? In a crime drama? But she's right! Fecking cow!!"
Read the whole post, here: http://twurl.nl/kbyzgr
Cheers Dom! ; )