Need some feedback on your feature, TV Pilot or similar?
DEVELOPMENT NOTES - normally £45, to my lovely Blog Readers £36. For this you'll get a logline and about 6 pages of notes, tackling any issues your draft may have in-depth, like structure, character, exposition, with suggestions for development in further drafts. Useful for those drafts where the writer is still developing the story and/or certain elements, or those pieces where the writer is unsure what to do re: conflicting feedback or similar.
OVERVIEW REPORTS - normally £35, to my lovely Blog Readers £28. For this you get a logline plus sections on Story, Characters, Dialogue, Arena and "Miscellaneous" (ie. format). Useful for those more polished pieces where the writer wants a "trial run" before sending off to competitions, agents, prodcos, etc.
I believe the art of good feedback is offering ideas as a "platform": you're the writer, you're the one who knows your story best - I'm here to help, not get you to agree with me... I'm not one of those vitriolic readers you hear horror stories about. Equally, I'm not one of those that'll tell you everything's "great" and leave you wondering why you bothered when you could've got your Mum to read it for free. I'll treat your script with respect whilst still addressing any issues it may have and offer concise, straight-forward suggestions to tackle them.
Want a recommendation before you spend your hard-earned cash on coverage? Here you go.
This offer is valid between Friday 23rd and Friday 30th of November ONLY - but send your script now to reserve your place, my lists fill up fast!! No need to pay until I send you an invoice through Paypal and we're ready to proceed! It's as easy as that.
Look forward to reading your work!
PS. Don't want Development Notes or an Overview Report? Perhaps you have a short film that needs looking at, a competition entry, treatment, proposal or short story? Then email me... If it's scriptwriting-related, I'm sure I can help - and you can still have 20% off!
PPS. Not quite finished on your draft yet, but want to take advantage of this offer? Then email me and I'll reserve you a place and you can still have 20% off as long as you utilise my service within four weeks, no worries.