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Tuesday, April 10, 2007

Power of 3 Alert #2

It's that time again where I say PEOPLE OUT IN CYBERLAND! PLEASE READ MY SCRIPT!!!

It's the one I'm going to enter for the BSSC, so the good news is, it's only 5 pages long.

The bad news is, I need some feedback ASAP 'cos I've gotta do a redraft by the end of the week. Again.

I will of course return the favour on your own short.

First 3 people to email me get it...

23 comments:

Lucy said...

"First 3 people to email me get it..."

My script that is, not a bunch of fives.

Lucy said...

Well, we've had just the ONE TAKER so far peeps... Two more to go!

Sheila West said...

e-mail me!

Sheila West said...

I just sent you an e-mail.

Sheila West said...

Got your script! Thanks! :)

Lucy said...

Thanks Sheila...Weirdly, your email hasn't come thru yet! I'll let you know if it does...Bloody AOL!

Sheila West said...

Hey Lucy, I just got done reading the script. I sent my feedback. Hope it's helpful.

Lucy said...

Hi Sheila! Thanks but NONE of your emails have come thru - yelp! Could you re-send? Try bang2write"at"hotmail"dot"co"dot"uk. Sorry for inconvenience!!!

Sheila West said...

Okay, gimmie a few minutes. :)

Sheila West said...

Sent! :)

Lucy said...

Well, got 2 of 3 in... So far, feedback joins up AND is diametrically opposed. Interesting! Can the third throw any more light on the matter?

Elinor said...

I'll have a read if you still need a third opinion. x el

Lucy said...

Thanks Elinor but it's with the third reader now this minute awaiting comments...You can baggsy a place on the next round of the redraft tho if you like!

Sheila West said...

Are you ever open to sharing the feedback of others? I'm curious as to just HOW diametricaly opposed my feedback was to that of the other reader.

And I don't mind if you post my feedback.

Lucy said...

Well, it boiled down to you not thinking it was funny and the other thinking it was! ; )

I don't usually post feedback in full unless it's from somewhere like The Writer's Room or Bluecat.

Lucy said...

PS> Sheila, did you not get my return email after you re-sent my feedback? It came from my hotmail account...Perhaps it's in your junk mail?

Lucy said...

UPDATE:

One thinks it's funny, but that the piece is too long.

One thinks it's just "okay" and needs work.

The other asked so many Q's that I'm thinking the piece asks more Q's than it answers.

They ALL wanted to see more of the throwaway character. Ironic.

Hmmm. Might be a case of back to the drawing board...

HOLD PLEASE!

Lucy said...

P.S. Thanks to my Three for their time and effort *rounds of applause* MWAH!

Good Dog said...

Does that mean I'm too late. Bloody 9 to 5!

Lucy said...

"The other asked so many Q's that I'm thinking the piece asks more Q's than it answers."

I'm officially a TIT!

The Q thing is an Adrian Mead technique. How could I forget??

Many apologies, Number 3. Feel free to thrash me next time you see me...

Sheila West said...

Sorry, Lucy, I've been out all day (away from the computer). Just got back in and am only now reading your blog again. I'm also in my e-mail account. It's 7:15 PM here in New England. I imagine it's about 3 in the morning there in Old England.

In my e-mail I count a total of 5 e-mails from you (two from the AOL acount, and three from the hotmail account) and one daemon failure notice thingy (failure for my attempt to mail to the aol account). I'm about to open them all.

Sheila West said...

Oops! Scratch that! Only ONE from the hotmail account! (The other two were comment notices telling me that Lucy posted to my blog!)

Pillock said...

Yikes!