KEEP LIFE IN PERSPECTIVE!



ANTARES IS THE 15TH BRIGHTEST STAR IN THE SKY. IT IS MORE THAN 1000 LIGHT YEARS AWAY.
THIS IS A HUBBLE TELESCOPE ULTRA DEEP FIELD INFRARED VIEW OF COUNTLESS 'ENTIRE' GALAXIES BILLIONS OF LIGHT-YEARS AWAY: 
BELOW IS A CLOSE UP OF ONE OF THE DARKEST REGIONS OF THE PHOTO ABOVE:
KEEP LIFE IN PERSPECTIVE
AND DON'T SWEAT THE SMALL STUFF!
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Thanks to Adrian Mead for forwarding me that! I think most of us are guilty at sometime or another of losing sight of the notion we're ALL cogs in a gigantic machine: this is a handy little reminder it's not *all* personal when those rejections come through or projects fall into difficulties. Keep writing and keep improving!
Friday, May 23, 2008
Just What The Doctor Ordered
Something For The (Bank Holiday) Weekend
I'm quite used to people dropping by this blog looking for "werewolf sex" and "talking dirty scripts" by now: you're even welcome to "take a bubble bath with no pants on" whilst "having flashbacks all day." Please - make yourselves at home.
Could this be, however, the craziest Google Search ever?
"The horse's bits were covered in foam."
WTF? What in the name of all that is holy could this Googler actually be looking for? And how on earth did Google direct them to MY BLOG? I have no recollection of dicussing foam or horse's bits or covering any bits with ANYTHING now you mention it. Seriously, we Bloggers should have some kind of Google Search Oscar. I reckon I could win. I could blub just as well as Gwyneth too.
On a completely different subject, everyone else seems to be doing it - so I will too: post a music video on a Friday you dirty pervs, what did you think I meant???
I like this one because its random randomness feels like the inside of my brain, plus I like the song, I plead guilty yer honour! Showed it to my son last night, his verdict? "Not bad for the olden days." Ah yes, the prehistoric era of 1986...
Enjoy the Bank Holiday!
Thursday, May 22, 2008
10 On TV Drama: UK versus US
SPOILERS: CSI & WAKING THE DEAD
Many thanks to the one person a week average who has emailed me over the last couple of months, telling me that my "10 on TV Drama" series has only 9 articles. I had noticed, ta: it was all part of a deliberate plan. Honest. Basically I wanted to see how the latest series of CSI and Waking The Dead would pan out before concluding this series in the hope that it would help me decide, once and for all, how I feel about the state of UK drama versus the US model.
It's been discussed many times in The Blogosphere and the general consensus of opinion *seems* to be (at least in the blogs I hang out on regularly) that the US do it better. I've read that Bloggers feel the UK have too few writers writing too many programmes; that we're choking in admin; that we should have a US-style writers' room system; that UK drama is underwritten; that we don't spend enough money on adult UK drama; that series runs should be longer; that initiatives like The BBC Writers' Academy is keeping new people out and doing veteran writers out of jobs; that we don't celebrate diversity or new writers enough; even that most drama in the UK is just plain drivel.
I am not a professional television writer, so I do not feel I can comment on the politics of television drama because I have not experienced them first hand nor had them impact my writing. However I have watched thousands of hours of television and responded to them as a both an audience member AND a writer, so I will talk about that instead with reference to CSI and Waking The Dead.
So, Warrick is dead. I actually already knew that thanks to the 40 people a day surfing in here over the last couple of weeks via Google looking for "Warrick's death spoilers" or variant. Thanks for that. However, it was inevitable: I'd already figured that Gary Dourdan's real life arrest for drugs surely meant his days were numbered. CSI and its offshoots have a long history of putting its characters in jeopardy for the end series finale (Sara in the last one courtesy of The Dollshouse Killer; Nick in the one before that, buried alive; Mac and his friends in CSI:NY taken over by terrorists; Horatio's revenge in Miami are just a few examples). Yet I'm struggling to think of one that's actually died, so it made a welcome change that SOMEONE in the team finally bought it. How paradoxically unlucky AND lucky are these guys??
And that's just it: Warrick is TOO lucky I think. From the offset, he has behaved as "recklessly and self destructive" as the interrogating police officer points out during the episode, yet he never comes to book for it. When he succeeded in getting Holly killed, right at the beginning of CSI, Grissom is told to get rid of Warrick, terminate his contract. He says no. Why? "He's a good CSI." That's lovely, but he's also "reckless and self destructive" and even a rogue as it turns out, going behind the department's back by hiring the PI as we discovered in last night's episode. And guess what: this behaviour continues. Not once but TWICE this series just past Warrick has been framed for murder, yet his buddies in CSI have come to the rescue.
You know how much I love CSI and Warrick was a good character. THAT'S why I wanted his exit to have more "bite". When Grissom became convinced that Warrick had been framed, I turned to my husband and said, "Yeah, but that's what happened when Joanna was killed, so the twist will be this time he's actually guilty." I was so convinced of this, that when Grissom came in and told Warrick about the evidence and how it was all set up and Warrick hugged Grissom, crying, I was waiting for him to pull back and say something like: "Thanks for believing in me...Again. You've been like a father to me, (blah blah - come on they like their schmaltzy stuff in CSI don't they??)...But it's true. I killed Gedda." Can you imagine? How cool would that be! One of their own ranks, a self confessed murderer! How would each of them deal with THAT bombshell??
Except it wasn't like that. Warrick got off again, thanks to his mates (again) and whilst it was a nice touch that it was the under sherriff (we think?) who kills Warrick and not the other supposed rogue cop, it all fell rather flat for me. It sets up the next series rather inevitably too, for that will undoubtedly be its serial element - find Warrick's killer and Gedda's mole, but more importantly, WHY the mole turned killer to the point that poor Warrick was implicated.
And that's a recurring problem for me with US TV characterisation: it's like they don't want to think badly of their characters; no matter how badly a character behaves - and Warrick really has over the years - we're asked to understand, no matter what. It's like the parents of the obnoxious child: "We don't want to stifle him." In lots of ways, it can really work; Grissom's favouritism over Warrick in the early years in particular caused some major conflicts, especially with Catherine, yet recently that seems to have faded away - just as Warrick really steps up with his errant behaviour. Quite a few things seem to have gone the same way this series: what's happened to Grissom's deafness by the way? Did he have some kind of miracle cure in an episode I missed somewhere?
What I admire then about UK TV Drama is it's not afraid to give its characters unlikable character traits. Whilst Grissom is an interesting character and team leader, ultimately it's Trevor Eve's character DSI Boyd as the leader of the Cold Case Team (the UK's CSI equivalent, in effect) who really captures my attention. Why? Well, in comparison to Grissom's geeky boyish charm, Boyd is irascible, even downright nasty sometimes. He will shout and swear, he will humiliate his staff, he will dismiss their observations, the works. As he says in Adrian Mead's episode I think it was: "Thanks but that is not even remotely helpful." He is, I think, THE BOSS FROM HELL. If it were real life, his staff turnover would be high on sick leave from the stress alone. In lots of ways, Boyd reminds me of Fitz, the similarly irascible and enigmatic psychologist from Jimmy McGovern's Cracker.
Yet Boyd's unlikable character traits are not apologised for: we're not asked to excuse him because of any tragedy in his life (and he's had plenty), he is just a git. But those horrible traits are contrasted against an array of other qualities and attributes. His good ones include a concern for others and fearsome bravery, rushing in to help in rescues, particularly that of women and children. But more importantly, those grey areas are included too, like his impetuous nature: his notion of "protecting" his junkie rent boy son Luke was by hanging a punter out the window for example. He can't talk about his feelings, even to the only woman who really understands him - Grace Foley: she had to hear about Luke's death from the team's pathologist, a woman as cold as she is efficient.
I love many things about CSI, including Warrick, and as a character study of the whole team I think it's brilliant as you know from this post. However, it has never involved me in the same way as Waking The Dead. It's like characters in US TV have to be heroes, even when then they're doing bad things - and when they can't get themselves out of it, their best bud will. If a a character is an antagonist in US TV, then they are that from the offset it seems...Here it seems to me we have more a yin/yang thing going on, with characters evolving into antagonists, or antagonists and protagonists at the same time (like Boyd) and even back again sometimes (like Adam in Spooks).
Funnily enough, I don't always like the stories in Waking The Dead (whereas I generally do in CSI); I can find WtD's a bit *too* covoluted sometimes, with MacGuffins aplenty, yet the characters and their stories - usually the "smaller" serial elements - have more impact for me. This last episode of Waking the Dead, with Boyd confronted with Luke's body at the morgue was a case in point: I cried. Like a baby. Now some of that was obviously Trevor Eve's excellent acting - he's always brilliant - but more than half of it was the investment in his character in the series. I BELIEVED this strong character, this guy who cannot express his feelings (unless they are irritation or anger) would be reduced to a blubbering wreck, for Luke's death WAS his fault. Had Boyd not been so busy saving everyone else, he could have saved Luke... Yet crucially that was left unsaid.
So - which do you prefer: US or UK TV drama? Why? Just because I prefer UK Drama doesn't mean you have to btw, all opinions welcome! Over to you...
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
Needed: Your Delicious Brain
I'm writing a new magazine article and doing some research...I need to talk to produced or commissioned writers and filmmakers of genre movies (sorry, no unproduced spec writers at this time, but if you want to chat about genre with me on many of the posts on here about it, please feel free... I get alerts even on old posts, so promise I will pick up any messages. Or drop me an email).
So, have you been involved in a genre film? It doesn't have to have been massively successful (though that would be great!), it doesn't even have to have distribution -maybe it ended up in the can for years? Maybe it didn't even get that far and is STILL stuck in development hell? Just as long as you've had an experience of writing and/or making a genre film, I want to talk to you... I'm particularly interested in speaking to people with experience on Rom Com and Horror, though all genres, writers and filmmakers are welcome.
If you would like more information about me or what I'm after BEFORE committing to an interview/informal chat via email, please feel free to contact me first - I'm happy to send more info, a CV, small bribes, etc (as long as the small bribe involves my general appreciation, I'm skint ; )
You can reach me on my usual email Bang2write"at"aol"dot"com, add me to your MSN contacts as bang2write"at"hotmail"dot"co"dot"uk or I'll see you on Facebook if you want to add me.
Thanks!
New Links For List Of Wonder
I've updated The List of Wonder! Kudos to Robin Kelly, Sir Daniel and Phill for their words of wisdom: consider yourselves archived. I've also given the List a general clean up and added some new sections so it should be easier to find what you're looking for... It's getting bigger! (ooo er). Remember, if you've seen a post that's helped you or think an entry on your own blog deserves to be added, email me. Enjoy!
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The Technical Posts:
Good Examples: Voiceover, Flashback, Montage, Intercut - okay it's by me but it does have some wick links in it by a load of other people
Killing The Hero by Robin Kelly
Creating Characters That Jump Off The Page by Robert Gregory Browne (Thanks to Lisa at Script Sanctuary for the link)
Imaginary Notes for Fawlty Towers (thanks to James Henry)
Basic Screenwriting Format - thanks to Film School Online
The Inspirational Posts:
Ivory Tower by Phill Barron
Confidence And Attitude by Danny Stack
Synopses: Which To Choose?
It's said that synopses are damn hard to write, which probably explains why so many scribes don't want to write them. Over the years I have a created an inadvertant and sweet sideline for myself: "I will read your script and write your synopsis for you for a fee". Catchy, hey?
I don't find synopses that difficult to write. Whether they're any good is another matter; having said that, I get plenty of read requests myself and the small (but increasing) pool of writers who get me to write theirs report they too get requests, so they can't be all bad. And though I have been accused of writing rubbish scripts more than once, no one has ever said to me: "Oi! That synopsis TOTALLY SUCKED!"
Maybe one of the reasons I don't find synopses hard could be because I write so many of them on a regular basis, either for myself or other people: practice makes perfect? I'm always surprised by writers' squeamishness about these things when they will dive into a 90 page script more than happily. Face your fear my friends and it will set you free. Honestly.
But what IS a synopsis? Like treatments, beat sheets and step outlines and whatnot, it's another of those things that no one really seems to know enough about, writer or producer alike. I've lost count of the number of times I've been asked for a "short synopsis" and the person in question means a logline for example. Sometimes they mean a synopsis like one you'd see on the back of a DVD box - 40 words or so, without spoilers for the ending. Other times they want every last detail (so more of a treatment really). As in the previous post then, here are my thoughts on the various types I see most regularly. Hope it helps any synopsis dilemmas you might be having... If indeed you're writing them ;)
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THE READER'S REPORT SYNOPSIS
If you've ever had a professional Reader's Report from somewhere like The Script Factory, Screen Agency or writing initiative, you will know you get included a one page (approximately 500 word) synopsis of your story. Except it isn't actually a synopsis: it's a BLOW BY BLOW ACCOUNT of every event in your story. If synopsis means "summary" (and it does, according to the dictionary), then this is clearly a complete misnomer.
Whatever the case, it's an accepted "type" of synopsis and I see plenty of Scribes emulating these Report-style synopses when sending them out with their scripts. My take? Don't. They are SO BORING to read. I think these type of synopses have a place in the reader's report so a scribe might see how their story has been interpreted, but a reader HATES writing them... How are they going to feel about them boomeranging back to them? If they're anything like me, they'll want to poke their eyes out. Worth risking, when there are other less irritating ways to write a synopsis? Up to you of course but I would say nein.
THE SET UP SYNOPSIS
This is the kind of synopsis where the characters and scenario are outlined, yet the resolution is left hanging: maybe a bunch of questions will be at the end hinting at how it might be resolved, but you'll have to read the script to know how it ends. In other words, you might get something like this:
BLOODY HONEYMOON
KATE and BEN have been going out for three years and when Ben finally proposes, instead of being pleased Kate suddenly realises how much time she has wasted on this loser. She decides to take bloody vengeance on Ben during their honeymoon, hunting him down aboard the luxury cruise liner they've boarded destined for the Carribean. Will Kate succeed in hacking her lover to bits? Will Ben escape? BLOODY HONEYMOON is the story of true love gone horribly wrong.
No that's NOT one of my specs or anyone else's, relax. I just made it up now (Thank God).
One of the major issues I've seen with this type of synopsis however is clarity. Just like treatments *can* be a catalogue of visuals, I find writers sometimes tie their synopses up with poetic prose. The end result is the same however, I havem't got a clue what is going on. Sometimes scribes will not make it obvious who is performing what role function or hint at a twist that is obvious, undermining potential drama. Other times it just all seems rather dreamy and random - they don't get to the "heart" of the matter, the seed of the story.
I was taught to write synopses this way at university and it did work for me quite well until about eighteen months ago. Then suddenly I was getting feedback from producers along the lines of "I want to know how it ends". "How it ends?" I said, "WTF? Don't you want a surprise???" Of the producers I spoke to, the answer was a resounding no. Why? Because they want to know, from just the synopsis, whether it's *worth* reading the script or not. And The Set Up Synopsis can't answer that. So they'd rather pass than waste a load of time on a script that may - or may not - be their bag it seems. I suppose in this case the synopsis is a kind of "guarantee" for them: READ THIS SCRIPT OR YOUR MONEY BACK. (Thank God that's not real else I'd be in serious negative equity by now).
THE ONE PAGE PITCH
It's these puppies I love now. Adrian Mead taught it to me and a whole bunch of us at his various courses and I've never looked back. What's refreshing about them is they set up and resolve but crucially don't tell the story beat by beat. In essence, you have the best of the old two synopses, neatly wrapped up in a vibrant little package. What's more, they're not boring to read. Result!
So, what's in your Pitch Doc? It's boiled down to 8 small elements:
Title
Time and Place
Genre
Protagonist
Goal
Obstacles (including Antagonist)
The Theme
"In The End By..." (Resolution)
Suddenly one's synopsis seems much more manageable.
I've used these for features, shorts, series, the works - and though my work is yet to BREAK ON THROUGH to the fabled "other side", it's been these that have got me attention, sometimes more than the script; only recently a producer rang me up and said "We've gone with another writer for the actual script but we'd like you to write the pitch stuff for when we submit it to the networks". It was paid work, better than nothing - and has got me another pitch-writing job. Can't grumble.
Of course, maybe pitch docs don't work for you - and maybe you don't do any of what I've outlined above. Just as there's no industry standard for treatments, there isn't one for synopses either. So what do you do? What troubles/successes have you had with them or the above? Over to you...
Sunday, May 18, 2008
Sharps Schenanigans
So like everyone else in the known universe without a TV credit, I have been writing a 30 minute script for *that* BBC initiative, Sharps.
My effort however has turned out total pants.
Shame really, 'cos there's lots I like about the script, including a talking cat who has a serious attitude problem. I was trying to go for an Ashes to Ashes/magic realism slant, but it's now just plain weird. End of the day, it just doesn't hang together over thirty minutes. Ten, it could be good. Thirty it's just pants. Hey ho, you live and learn.
No point flogging a dead horse though and I have a short to put away in a drawer, nice one. Time to get out another idea I put in a drawer over a year ago that I had forgotten about, but thanks to a weird (and random) comment from Him Indoors I have resurrected. I plan to get a draft done this week and maybe some Po3 action on it next week, so if you're interested in doing a swap, register your interest now Daily Mail style, though I promise I will send you only a script and not a supposedly wonderful partwork on Victorian engineering or some other sick-making souvenir. Enjoy your writing and if you're off to Cannes, have a productive (and fun!) time.
Oh - and the random comment of my husband, you ask?
"We really should go line dancing."
Interesting...
Friday, May 16, 2008
Outlines, Beat Sheets & Treatments
Many people ask me what is the "best" way to go about writing a feature in particular. My answer? There is no "best" way. But it's definitely going to help if you've done your prep first.
It would seem the tide is turning when it comes to treatments and outlines; when I left university in prehistoric times (all of five years ago), the general consensus in my class seemed to be that outlines and treatments were for anal wimps. They take the spontaneity out of it! We are artists! We need to BREATHE, man.
But we were, like, wrong. Man. You have to be a mentalist to not write an outline or treatment first, because an outline or treatment actually HELPS your writing. Those specs that are outlined and treatmented (word?) first ARE better scripts. Why? Because they are not streams of consciousness. Events make sense. Characters do stuff that pays off and are generally more rounded. Arena is better developed. It is *just generally* better. Plus all the *really* sucky inevitable first draft crap is gone, because the writer has excised it as s/he works out what will happen already. That makes a reader's life a WHOLE lot easier.
But what is the difference between an outline and a treatment? What about Beat Sheets? Scriptments??? There's such a vast array of names out there, it's no wonder writers and producers alike are confused as to what the other is doing or asking for. As a general rule, whenever a producer asks me to write preliminary stuff like this, I always ask them what they are expecting: one page? Five, ten? A breakdown on characters, plot? A list? A short story? What?? It's a system that seems to work well, since I've never known anyone to say anything along the lines of "WTF are you asking me for, you should somehow see INTO MY BRAIN and know automatically, YOU'RE FIRED!" Whereas I AM haunted by one instance where I SLAVED over a fifteen page "pitch" about four years ago for one guy (who I'd had a very long meeting with a week earlier), transcribing all my notes from that meeting into a workable storyline... Only to be told he'd only be looking for "twenty five words or something, you know, a logline; the story's not set in stone yet, I'm not even sure I want to go this route." OUCH.
There is no "industry standard" when it comes to pitch packages, so setting your own perimeters with your producer or knowing what others put into theirs might help you get started. So here are my thoughts on what they all are. Hope it helps...
OUTLINES
I think of outlines as writer-only material. It's the document in which YOU work out your storyline, though you can share it with script readers and editors, natch. Five or six pages should do it for a feature; less for smaller scripts obviously. Since it's all about story, I don't think you have to stress too much about character in an outline; it's all about making sure the story is coherent and in the right order. I recommend to Bang2writers generally that they write an outline in the style of a short story, even starting "Once upon a time..." if that helps (and it does some people). However I've seen outlines written as bullet points, mind maps and all sorts (though I HAVEN'T done coverage on these btw). As long as it makes sense to YOU and in turn means a coherent script will come out of it, who cares what it looks like? Better to start with an outline that looks like hell than write a script with no outline at all my ol' grandma always used to say... Actually that's not true, she said the rainbow men were coming 'cos she was totally barking, but you get my drift.
TIP: If you cannot finish your outline or have a problem with something in it, it's wiser to work on it THEN than just gloss over it and go to script regardless.
BEAT SHEET
I think of a beat sheet as a list of everything that will happen, in order, throughout your screenplay. Some people call a Beat Sheet a Step Sheet or a Scene Breakdown. If you work in TV, especially soap, there's a good chance you will be expected to submit a scene breakdown to your script editor for approval before going to script. If you go on a long screenplay course like a degree or mentorship, you may be asked for these too. I think Beat Sheets are brilliant because it's a way of diagnosing "flabby bits" in your screenplay or seeing in advance that one effort is better placed somewhere else in order to pay off later. They are however incredibly dull to write AND read. But they really are worth doing. You just have to grit your teeth and get on with it. I like to write my Beat Sheets with sluglines so I know where each scene takes place AND it's all there ready for me when I start the script so I never get lost, but you don't *have* to do this.
TREATMENTS
A treatment can be prep; you may write one to explore your story or to submit for a particular initiative or funding source. This will become your SELLING document. It is this you will use to get your producer and hopefully your deal. This is why the treatment must be uber-polished and must totally rock.
I get loads of treatments now, either through private clients or Scottish Screen. The key to a good treatment I think is not only in hooking the reader in, but remembering it's all about STORY. You can do this any way, but I think the short story idea is a "goody" again here because it's a simple format that is hard to screw up: if you use something like Grimm's fairy tales as your template, you have an automatic Three Act Structure to give you a hand. However, I have seen treatments that divide up Acts that have worked well; I've also seen treatments with introductions by producers, character lists, or written supposedly by the characters themselves - letters, diaries, biographies and suchlike. Sometimes a well-thought-out accompaniment helps, like a photograph of the lost place, character or pet which iws the focus of the piece. Once someone had gone to the trouble of making a fake front page with the news that kicked off the story, another wrote the treatment AS a magazine article, complete with pictures of the characters.
When these fancy ideas work well, they can be brilliant. But beware of covering up a poorly conceived story with fancy artwork. The treatments I read are so often just a series of visuals and this means I haven't got a clue what is going on. you need to make every action of your characters' journey obvious, it's like scene description; don't think about the LOOK of the scene, but how your STORY fits together. Character is often undersold in the treatment too, which is why I'm a big fan of what people sometimes call the "scriptment", which appear to be treatments with dialogue in, something I've only seen spring up in the last two years or so. The key here is in making sure that you don't go OVERBOARD with the dialogue; using a little to characterise certain people works wonders - use too much and the reader wonders why you bothered submitting a treatment, why not the actual script?
NEXT: Synopsis or Pitch Doc, which should I choose?
LINKS
A Rather Good Collection of Treatments, Step Outlines, Scriptments from the lovely peeps at Simply Scripts
How to Write A Step Outline (eHow Guide) - a useful breakdown
How To Write A Treatment by Kristen - Some straightforward points here and short
Formulating The Treatment - some useful points on the difference between synopses and treatments as well as loglines
How To Write A Treatment - some interesting stuff here on laying out your treatment
Writing Treatments - my favourite site, contains everything you need ever know about treatments
Thursday, May 15, 2008
Short Film Scripts Wanted
I saw this on Talent Circle this morning and thought some of you peeps might be interested... If you're not a member of Talent Circle already, WHY NOT?? This is the kind of great opportunity featured on there all the time. Register today!!!
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From Solarmonite Productions:
I am looking for a short film script, 10 pages or less, that deals with either of the following:
1. Contemporary social and/or polital issues affecting British society,
2. Social and/or political issues affecting immigrants or immigrant groups in the UK
If you have written a short film script that you think may address these topics, please forward them onto me. The script I choose will be shot with a £10k budget and £500 will be paid to the writer if the script is chosen to be made.
No CVs, just scripts please.
Please just attach the scripts to your email. NO SPECS OR TREATMENTS, JUST SCRIPTS.
Send to: solarmonite"at"googlemail"dot"com
Thanks,
Nick Tyrone
The Man Who Would Be Queen At Cannes
The Cannes Film Festival opened this week and writer/director and friend of this blog JK Amalou is off to the other side of the Channel to flog his new film, The Man Who Would Be Queen with sales agent Visual Factory. I'm lucky enough to have seen this film already and can tell you it is a stellar hoot and has one of my favourite (not to mention outrageous) lines of dialogue of all time in it.
But don't take my word for it: watch this clip. Enjoy and keep an eye out for the release because I have faith that it won't be long now before it's out in a cinema near you.
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
Character Vs. Plot
No I'm not dead -- thanks for asking. Just VERY busy and generally distracted. And teaching EFL 'cos super broke. Joy.
Thanks for the comments on the coincidence post: some useful stuff there. Seems the general consensus is coincicidence is an absolute no-no UNLESS it's a small issue AND gets your protagonist into some kind of trouble.
So here's another for you: character or plot - which is most important? After all, we read loads on creating great characters and loads on killer plot and structure. It's all well and good saying they MUST go hand in hand, but it's said that audiences don't remember plots, they remember characters. On the flip side, you can have the greatest character in the world, but if the plot is rubbish your spec is going nowhere.
So does character have the upper hand in a spec? Or plot?
So what is it to be? You can be on one side - or the other. Not both. Over to you...